Sunday, December 16, 2012

Work

Tiring.
Work piles up
like snow, when you don't shovel
for a few minutes, it grows.
10 hours a day,
give or take a few.

Wanting to rest, but
the massive amount has
you under submission.
You do as it says, or
you'll regret it.

2 comments:

  1. Great poem Joon! I loved the comparisons you did with the homework. I liked how you incorporated the result of not doing your homework when having the chance.

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  2. Great job on the simile. I also really liked the ending, which reminds me, I have to go do my homework...

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