Great poem Joon! I loved the comparisons you did with the homework. I liked how you incorporated the result of not doing your homework when having the chance.
Great job on the simile. I also really liked the ending, which reminds me, I have to go do my homework...
Great poem Joon! I loved the comparisons you did with the homework. I liked how you incorporated the result of not doing your homework when having the chance.
ReplyDeleteGreat job on the simile. I also really liked the ending, which reminds me, I have to go do my homework...
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